How To Construct A Killer Logline

Condensing your 110-page screenplay into one sentence is no walk in the park. Writing a logline for your screenplay can be a daunting task, but a completed, polished logline is one of, if not THE most valuable marketing tool that you have for trying to sell your script. Construct a killer logline and wow those readers with the tips outlined in today's "How To" post!

How to Construct a Killer Logline

What Is A Logline?

Imagine you only had ten seconds to tell someone about your new script. What would you tell them? This quick, simplified explanation of your entire story is your logline.

Wikipedia defines a logline as a "A brief (usually one-sentence) summary of a television program, film, or book that states the central conflict of the story."

Why Do I Need One?

Creating a logline is an often tough, but necessary task for writers both pre- and post-production of their screenplays. During the writing process, a strong logline can help guide you and keep you focused. After you are done writing, a strong logline can help you get your screenplay read or sold.

A reader will often decide after reading or hearing the logline whether or not a screenplay is worth their time.

How Do I Write A Great One?

  • Don't forget the basics.

    All loglines should include your story's main character (protagonist), the opposing character of force (antagonist), the main character's goals and the stakes of achieving those objectives.

  • Carefully select each word.

    Nothing turns a reader away quicker than a dry logline. Make use of powerful action verbs and unique adjectives to describe your characters and plot events. Keep a Thesaurus handy for help and inspiration.

  • Be specific.

    Chances are there has been another screenplay written that is similar to yours. Be specific with your logline, and identify what makes your story different from others like it.

  • Avoid asking questions.

    Leave questions out of your logline. It is common for writers to want to use questions to increase suspense, but more often than not, they have the opposite effect. Readers can almost always assume the answer will be yes. There is no point telling a story if the audience already knows how it ends

  • Rewrite, rewrite, rewrite.

    Just like with your screenplay, your first draft won't be perfect. Embrace the rewriting and editing process. Ask trusted friends or collegues to review your logline and give you feedback. Keep rewriting until you have something you are proud to share.

Check Out These 10 Examples!

  1. The Godfather

    "The agin patriarch of an organized crime dynasty transfers control of his clandestine empire to his reluctant son."

  2. Pulp Fiction

    "The lives of two mob hit men, a boxer, a gangster's wife, and a pair of dinner bandits intertwine in four tales of violence and redemtion."

  3. Jurassic Park

    "During a preview tour, a theme park suffers a major power breakdown that allows its cloned dinosaur exhibits to run amok."

  4. There's Something About Mary

    "A man gets a chance to meet up with his dream girl from high school, even though his date from back then was a complete disaster."

  5. The Matrix

    "A computer hacker learns from mysterious rebels about the true nature of his reality and his role in the war against its controllers."

  6. Gladiator

    "When a Roman General is berayed, and his family is murdered by an emporor's corrupt son, he comes to Rome as a gladiator to seek revenge."

  7. The Sixth Sense

    "A boy who communicates with spirits that don't know why they're dead seeks the help of a disheartened child psychologist."

  8. The Hangover

    "Three buddies wake up from a bachelor party in Las Vegas, with no memory of the previous night and the bachelor missing. They make their way around the city in order to find their missing friend before his wedding."

  9. Avatar

    "A paraplegic marine dispatched to the moon Pandora on a unique mission becomes torn between following his orders and protecting the world he feels is his home."

  10. The Dark Night

    "When the menace known as the Joker emerges from his mysterious past, he wreaks havoc and chaos on the people of Gotham, the Dark Knight must accept one of the greatest psychological and physical tests of his ability to fight injustice."

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Want to learn more?

Check out a couple more awesome sources on loglines:

Want to check out some more famous loglines?

Search for your favorite movie or TV show on IMDb! (That's what we did.) Most movies and shows will have a one-sentence description on their IMDb homepage!

Thanks for reading!
-Alli 
@alli_unger6