In our last blog post, we introduced the 3 main types of phone calls that you may encounter in a screenplay:
- Scenario 1: Only one character is seen and heard.
- Scenario 2: Both characters are heard, but only one is seen.
- Scenario 3: Both characters are heard and seen.
In today's post, we will be covering Scenario 2: Both characters are heard, but only one is seen. For more information on Scenario 1, please refer to our previous blog "How To Format a Phone Call in Traditional Screenwriting: Scenario 1."
Scenario 2: Both characters are heard, but only one is seen.
For this scenario, use the voice-over character extension ("V.O.") for the unseen character, as shown above for Shelly's dialogue. The application of the character extension for voice-over is often confused with the extension for off-screen ("O.S"). The difference between the two lies in the location of the unseen character. You will almost always use "voice-over" for this type of phone conversation.
- Voice-Over: The character speaking is not in the same location as the character that is visible to the audience. The example above demonstrates this application. Since Shelly is not anywhere in Johnathon's apartment, we use "V.O."
- Off-Screen: The character speaking is in the same location as the visible character. This extension would be used if Shelly and Johnathon were not on the phone, but rather talking to each other from different parts of Johnathon's apartment (i.e. Shelly talks to Johnathon from the kitchen, while the audience sees Johnathon's reaction and reply on-screen from his bedroom).
Writers may select the voice-over phone call scenario in their screenplay for a variety of reasons including:
- The writer is more interested in showing the actions and reactions of the on-screen character.
- The example in the infographic above demonstrates this use of the voice-over tool. The writer wants the audience to focus on Johnathon and his reaction to Shelly's acceptance of his date proposal.
- The writer wants to keep the identity, location, and/or actions of the character on the other end of the phone call hidden from the audience.
- One well-known example of this use of the voice-over tool is the phone conversation between Bryan Mills and Marko from the 2008 action thriller, Taken, right after Bryan discovers his daughter has been kidnapped.
(Dialogue by Taken screenwriters, Luc Besson and Robert Mark Kamen.)
- In this example, the writers hide Marko, the kidnapper's, location and reaction to Bryan's statement from the audience to add to the suspense of the story.
Be sure to check in for our final post on this "How To" topic later this week.
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